oh, this is C&C outline. i dont wanna put them together. it looks messy. and i prefer to use this outline for article, because it seems more interesting.
title:
compare and contrast the high school education in US and in China.
topic sentence I
most parts of high school education are basically different for two countries.
details:
1. GPA is a really important factor in US high school; there is no GPA at all in China.
2. the grades are private in US; you can easily check other's grade in China.
3. students are supposed to choose their courses freely in US; there are many limitations for students to choose course in China.
topic sentence II
despite the differences, there are some similarities between high school education in two countries.
details:
1. mid-term and final exam are important for both countries.
2. attendance is also an important factor.
3. there is one great exam which is really important for getting into university in both countries.
conclusion:
the high school students in two countries undergo almost two types of education.
Jianghang, I want you to work on the C&C paper, but I do not agree with the similarities that you addressed above. Instead of showing similarities, just focus on differences. Also, narrow down your subtopics more specifically such as grading systems, choosing courses, and one more. If you want to mention similarities, google more information about the characteristics for high schools of two countries. Submit objective factors that everyone agrees with. Carry on, and I'm looking forward to reading your paper.
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